"Hi Sarah Hagstrom, I would love your feedback on one of my low ticket offers. I feel the messaging on my sales page needs to be more compelling to create urgency and a no brainer investment. Perhaps the title of the course may need a change too? Here is the link to the page: www... Thank you in advance."

"Okay, so this is a great start, but we need to tighten it up 🙂 There is too much going on. For a low ticket offer you don’t need a huge sales page.

First, we need a stronger transformation. My suggestions:

• The 21-Day Anxiety Reset
• A Structured Nervous System Program to Feel Calmer and More in Control
• The 21-Day Nervous System Reset
• Reduce Anxiety and Stop Feeling Constantly On Edge
• From Anxious to Regulated
• A Structured 21-Day Program to Calm Your Nervous System

We need a strong name (what they want) and for it to be tangible, clear result - so think about that.

I like that you have the testimonial section (What people have shared after starting the reset) however, can you make those images larger? Do you have any testimonials where people will allow you to show their faces? Those go a long way. Also pulling out headlines and highlighting them. See my examples attached.

For the What’s Inside section, those need to be in their words — what they want.
For example, you say: How to respond to anxiety with clarity and calm rather than fighting it, whereas they might want: What do I do when I notice a panic attack? So I would write: Exactly how to handle panic attacks in the moment so they don’t set you back.

So for every single thing, it needs to be written so it’s what they are looking for. Does that make sense?

For the "You Will Receive " section, I would shift the focus to make it more tangible. For example: You will receive a 21-day plan, so you know exactly what to work on.

It will include videos, audios, and written practices, so no matter your learning style, you will be able to calm your nervous system and decrease your anxiety. This is also self-paced, so you can take more time or go faster, and come back to these tools over and over.

I would do the same for the modules — make it so it’s exactly what they desire. For example, I might change them to something like this:
Module 0 - Start Here for Less Anxiety
Module 1 - Why This Is Happening to You and How to Fix It
Module 2 - Why You Can’t Switch Off and How to Do It Without Losing Your Edge

Again, you know what your people want more than I do. Every module should speak to that and be specific to anxiety. 😉

I would remove this line from the Not for You section: “If you are seeking more personalized and intensive support, private 1:1 sessions are available separately…”
It makes them second-guess signing up, and it seems obvious.

I would shorten the What Happens Next section to something like this: What Happens Next - After purchase, you will receive immediate access via email with lifetime access to all of the materials. I can’t wait to get started with you.

I would lower the price to $21, and I would have buy buttons on the page that say ONLY $21 or Buy Now ($21)

I would also have a section that lists out everything included and has a value associated with it. Example
What Is Included in the Anxiety Reset
✨16 Guided Audios to help you unwind and heal (Valued at $500)
✨the 7 Video Modules with a deeper understanding of anxiety and how to work through it in your daily life (Valued at $900)
Then have the total value: XX price→Your price today: Only $21

Also, can you have the sales page be separate from the checkout page? Notice how when you click a buy button on my sales page: It takes you to a separate checkout page.
It’s cleaner that way and less distracting.

Okay, I want you to think about this, make updates, and then I will take another look and help you make it even stronger and get it selling! Let me know if you have any questions!”